Concept: "A heavily driven dungeon level" 
Content: A railroad mine-cart torture funnel “fun”geon. 
Writing: Clear Mechanistic descriptions of actions and events at each station.
Art/design: Map, art, and text interleaved and coarsely integrated.
Usability: Beware the layout of station 6. Prepare a boring biography for station 4. 

Concept: “A seemingly normal man poorly dressed pulling a cart full of severed heads”
Content: See Concept.
Writing: Unexpectedly cursed, in the best way.
Art/design: Yellow, Black. Lovely sketch of a pitiful scvm with a broken cart.
Usability: It goes right when it all goes horribly wrong.